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The Dancer

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You numb my eyes From tippity-top To eight count plies Rhythmic grooves Crossing hard waxed floors Bouncing orange orbs denied Double bass pounding, pounding In my ears Heart Pride Moving like soft water Untethered sass Yesterday’s child Today a Dancer Numbing eyes

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Date: 4/29/2022 11:44:00 AM
Nice one Jim . :)
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