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The Crosses In Your Eyes

You never really knew the beauty of your soul. Of how it is possible to be both old and young within the same body that tells about the years past, but can put to shame so many of today’s indolent youth. How were you able to retain such innocence, for only a child can categorically say such abhorrence of one type of food even with the knowledge that it is good? Yet words of deep understanding pour forth from the same mouth. When the gift to listen was showered upon the earth you must have paid attention, for you have it in abundance “To hear is normal, to listen, a gift, to understand...a miracle”* One who would care to keep these words would understand. You do. You are sensitive. Who would have thought it so? You have that amazing capacity to command words to your bidding and just the right touch of irreverence to twist them when it suits you. Still and all, you feel the wound deeply and I’d hate to be the cause of it. I tried to look into your heart through your words. Words which were already read by many before I entered the scene yet they did not see the sadness, the dark that lurked in the corner of your light - They were too mesmerized by the laughter, to see the crosses in your eyes. *John W. Wulf, author of the book The Lady Who Loves the Whisper ___________________________________________________________ 1. The Poetry Soup Poem of the Week - 02 August to 08 August, 2015 2. The Crosses In Your Eyes Contest - 3rd Place , 29 July 2015 Sponsor: Justin Bordner - Kim Patrice Nunez 27 July 2015

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Date: 8/26/2015 8:09:00 AM
Beautiful
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Date: 8/9/2015 2:39:00 AM
Thank you so much TPS, for this honor. I enjoyed the whole week. More power in all your undertakings. Kim
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Date: 8/7/2015 12:30:00 PM
Hi Kim, congratulations on your Poem of the Week! Well-deserved, my friend! Pandita
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Date: 8/7/2015 1:34:00 AM
atta girl... best wishes on your POTW distinction, kim!
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Date: 8/6/2015 9:03:00 AM
Kim congratulations on poem of the week, enjoy the honor
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Date: 8/5/2015 11:37:00 AM
Well written and lovely. POW
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Date: 8/5/2015 7:22:00 AM
Grats on having this poem of the week :) well done!!
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Date: 8/4/2015 8:42:00 AM
Hey Kim, BIG congratulations on your wonderful poem being chosen for POTW! Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 8/3/2015 11:14:00 PM
Nice write. Congratulations on poem of the week!!!
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Date: 8/3/2015 7:16:00 AM
Congratulations Kim on Poem of the Week
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Date: 8/2/2015 7:38:00 PM
Great choice for POW...congrats
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Date: 8/2/2015 6:44:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, touching story. Interesting all the way through. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.
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Date: 8/2/2015 3:38:00 PM
Congratulations Kim on POTW!! Well-Done!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 8/2/2015 3:21:00 PM
Congrats on poem of the week... SKAT
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Date: 8/2/2015 1:58:00 PM
- Congratulations with your P.O.T.W, dear Kim - Happy new week - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/2/2015 1:15:00 PM
you go girl.. congrats on your POTW award!.. huggs
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Date: 8/2/2015 9:36:00 AM
Gee Kim, you just get better and better with your writes. You have opened up your heart with this write and the previous one I just read. Something has just broken out of you, completely in touch with your feelings and emotions and able to put them into such meaningful verse. Keep up the great writes Kim.......John
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Date: 8/2/2015 7:37:00 AM
Dropping back to congratulate you on poem of the week Kim - congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/1/2015 12:37:00 PM
still sending out gems, like “ The Crosses In Your Eyes, ”. A great tribute, and full of analytical insight .B. J. “A ” 2 ( Bill . )
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Date: 8/1/2015 10:35:00 AM
Congrats on your awesome win in Justin's contest. This is a lovely tribute. I don't know John. I've only visited one poem, but....he must be a special poet to have received this tribute, Kim. Poetry is a beautiful thing and those who write....beautiful people.
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Date: 7/31/2015 7:07:00 PM
Fantastic ending here. It really finishes the poem with a final flare. Many congrats.
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Date: 7/30/2015 6:55:00 PM
Kim.....a exquisite write and tribute! I read John's insert on his book and I definitely want to read it! : ) Hugs
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Date: 7/30/2015 1:44:00 PM
a sure winner, kim.. huge congrats!.. huggs
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Date: 7/30/2015 11:43:00 AM
Congratulation on your placement in the contest..........A.M.
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Date: 7/30/2015 10:39:00 AM
Kim, a beautiful tribute to John and congratulations on your placement in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, the war dead
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