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The Comet

The Comet The sun Consumes The moon delights The stars watch amused As I twirl in the night

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Date: 5/7/2024 11:07:00 AM
Aurore, I'm thinking about seeing a comet and what is actually going on with the sun and moon at the same time. This is quite clever and promotes a lot of thought with very few words. Was actually seeing a comet an inspiration for this or were you creatively composing? Just curious.
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Date: 4/18/2021 9:10:00 AM
a cute and enjoyable little poem!
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Date: 5/6/2016 2:32:00 AM
A warm welcome to Poetry Soup Aurore. Your poem reminds me a bit of an older poem of mine called Celestial Shades. I hope you will enjoy all the friendly talented poets here. I enjoyed your first offering very much. Aloha, Connie ; )
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Aurore Severo
Date: 5/24/2016 11:59:00 PM
I will for sure read thank you, xoxoxoxoxox
Date: 12/31/2015 12:09:00 AM
Nice imagery!
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Aurore Severo
Date: 2/12/2016 10:55:00 PM
thank you xoxo
Date: 8/9/2015 9:28:00 PM
The celestial dance of a cosmic trance. Even heavens above are amazed per chance.
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Aurore Severo
Date: 8/29/2015 11:03:00 PM
xoxoxo thank you
Date: 8/9/2015 9:52:00 AM
a 7 + 10 your work is outstand, Aurore, hugs Eve
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Aurore Severo
Date: 8/9/2015 3:59:00 PM
thank you xoxo
Date: 8/4/2015 11:34:00 AM
A most delightful poem, Aurore! You whirl and twirl under the heavenly sky, and we follow in your wake! This exudes the joy of living...// paul
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Aurore Severo
Date: 8/4/2015 11:41:00 PM
thank you Paul xoxo
Date: 8/1/2015 8:51:00 AM
I have enjoyed your work, you will fit in nicely. Welcome to the soup.
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Aurore Severo
Date: 8/4/2015 11:40:00 PM
I hope size 6
Date: 8/1/2015 3:05:00 AM
A wonderful write to wellcome yourself to the great community where you will meet variety of peoples who are willing and ready to support by giving you positive feedback. Also is a place where you will lean and be sharpened by reading others poetry. I would like to make friend with you, also I will be looking forward to see read much of your wonderful write. Hope you don't mind to check me up.........A.M.
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Aurore Severo
Date: 8/4/2015 11:40:00 PM
warm kindness thank you
Date: 7/30/2015 8:52:00 PM
such an outstanding read....you have true talent indeed.....;)
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Aurore Severo
Date: 7/31/2015 9:29:00 PM
thank you eric xoxo
Date: 7/29/2015 4:12:00 PM
Welcome to poetry Soup Aurore. Love your pretty name. I enjoyed this magical piece and look forward to reading more! 7 Aloha, Connie
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Aurore Severo
Date: 7/29/2015 11:15:00 PM
aloha thank you
Date: 7/28/2015 5:20:00 PM
Lovely write :) welcome to PoetrySoup Aurore.. ~ Emilia
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Aurore Severo
Date: 7/29/2015 11:14:00 PM
thank you
Date: 7/28/2015 2:39:00 PM
Lovely imagery Aurore, a delight to read, smiles, James :) :)
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Aurore Severo
Date: 7/28/2015 4:06:00 PM
thank you james
Date: 7/28/2015 11:41:00 AM
Fine short poem - I think this is called a concrete poem - but whatever it is called - I like it. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Aurore Severo
Date: 7/28/2015 4:06:00 PM
thank you
Date: 7/26/2015 10:31:00 PM
Nice poem Aurore!! I enjoyed reading.
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Aurore Severo
Date: 7/28/2015 4:05:00 PM
thank you
Date: 7/26/2015 10:19:00 PM
Aurore, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/26/2015 9:42:00 PM
Nice to enjoy your words this evening. Light & Love
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Aurore Severo
Date: 7/26/2015 10:26:00 PM
Light & Love & Woman Power! thanks
Date: 7/25/2015 10:47:00 PM
Aurore, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Aurore Severo
Date: 7/26/2015 12:59:00 AM
thanks