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The Cockroach

I have a carapace shiny and black, And when I visit I do more than snack! I scuttle about in the dead of night, Never once do I need to use a light. If I am seen people get a big fright, Why do they all have to get so uptight? I am always under constant attack! They chase me about and give me a whack, Though peppered like a plane flying through flack! Away I must dash to the nearest crack. These people I seem to overexcite, Yet I am so small and always contrite. My PR stinks you can say what you might, Definitely not a mother’s delight! But when I am safe in my own little shack, Playing with a piece of unsmoked tobac . To this accord I will hang up a plaque, You wont catch me I’m as sharp as a tack. You need not worry about the invite, I’ll be the last at your party tonight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/27/2017 9:33:00 PM
Interesting read, Shane. I like your personification. By the way, I too have a written a piece on the cockroach. Title: "To my pest-friend." If you find time, please read it and offer your comments.
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Date: 6/27/2017 10:43:00 PM
This could crimp and curl the stiff whiskers of a smiling walrus, Shane.:)) That would be a sight, yes? Keep well, love, Mikki
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Date: 6/11/2017 2:42:00 PM
Nice little poem Shane - sums up the bug a treat. Well written. Best regards, Dennis
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Date: 8/31/2016 5:55:00 PM
This is so funny...and clever! Love it!
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Date: 12/24/2015 6:53:00 AM
This is lovely. Wishing you a wonderful christmas season and a fulfilling new year.
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Date: 10/9/2015 7:12:00 AM
You're a brave soul to write about those little buggers but you did it with class. Glad you're posting. Hugs, dear....btw....loved Those last two lines...
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Date: 10/7/2015 6:37:00 PM
I forward poetry to a friend of mine; a soulmate for sure. I'm sure she'd love your work! :) I'll send this to myself, then forward it to her. She is greatly impressed by the talented poets on the Soup! Very clever rhyming. The anchors don`t drag the reader down, only makes it more fun to read on. Keep up the amazing work, Shane. Best to you, my friend, Mikki :)
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Date: 10/7/2015 11:29:00 AM
This made me smile but also squirm lol have never had one of these visitors and I never want to see one in the house - good to see you back:-) hugs jan xx 7
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Date: 10/7/2015 3:28:00 AM
- If he come to visit your house ..... hard to get him to leave :))) - My first poem about a cockroach :)))) - Good to see you Shane, best wishes for a great day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Shane Cooper
Date: 10/7/2015 3:31:00 AM
thanks Anne-Lise, A bit of nonsense but i was in the mood for a rhyme. Congrats on another POTD. Your poetry rocks my friend! love Shane xxx

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