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Elegant frequent interludes Ebony and ivory harmonised The maestro raises his hands A single note from a violin Reverberates the soul within Piano keys dance the storm Conductor's baton waves the way The orchestra now as one Vibrations pounding in my heart Sweet cellos and harps sing Two dueling clarinets take front stage Silhouetted angels fill the mind As the beating of timpanis start A fluttering flute swiftly flies With dulcet melodies swirling about A double bass begins the final coda Then blissfully, I open my eyes

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Date: 7/11/2017 4:52:00 PM
Your imagery is great here Wolf. I could almost hear the come in. Nicely done my friend. Dean
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White Wolf
Date: 7/11/2017 4:54:00 PM
Thank you very much, Dean /|\
Date: 7/11/2017 9:21:00 AM
A man after my own heart. Oh how I love to hear a full orchestra. It is simply divine. Love this musical taunt, Budgie:)
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Date: 7/11/2017 9:24:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel! Enjoy your day, my friend /|\
Date: 7/11/2017 6:35:00 AM
Everything about this poem is so cool. What a great music themed post my friend. Really fantastic.
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Date: 7/11/2017 6:37:00 AM
Thanks Chris /|\
Date: 7/11/2017 2:38:00 AM
Divine music, heavenly write my friend, WW. Bravo!
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Date: 7/11/2017 2:42:00 AM
We are both dancing today, my friend /|\
Date: 7/10/2017 10:12:00 PM
Wonderful musical poem, Rick :) I love the line: the orchestra now as one <3
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Date: 7/10/2017 10:15:00 PM
Thank you, Sara /|\

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