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The Clay

A doctor or the lost and found Can’t heal my heart Or remove this frown Find my wondering Muse When everything’s upside down Even hands can hurt On a spinning wheel going round I need some hope A scribble in the sand Sweat in the mud Someone to understand The rhyme in the chaos That I’m more than this lack See a light in total darkness Maybe belief can bring me back Cause all feeling is gone Has it died or run away Am I a ghost or still a man Will love rise again one day Am I walking to you or nowhere Can I even ever know it If there’s beauty in the dirt Could a poet somehow show it I need some hope A scribble in the sand Sweat in the mud Someone to understand The rhyme in the chaos That I’m more than this lack See a light in total darkness Maybe belief can bring me back Can you feel my wilderness Without a sound I’m calling you Tangled thoughts lost in the wind Are any of them getting through Taste my echo.. feel my heart Can you see when I can’t say Wondering soul.. so far gone Only the potter remakes the clay ~Lyric Man Note: This song is philosophical. This guy has been reduced, to what feels like, a clump of worthless clay. But in the right hands, with belief, beauty can come from brokenness. He’s desperate for a poetic potter. For someone to still believe in him when there’s no visible reason to. This song is a shot in the dark, a cry for help from a guy who has lost his way and the belief he can “fix” himself. I think he also visions that romantic scene from the movie, “Ghost” with the guy and gal reshaping the clay on a spinning wheel.

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Date: 9/12/2019 9:22:00 AM
I enjoyed the poem and accompanying narrative. Have a great day my friend.
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Date: 6/3/2019 11:35:00 PM
Beautifully written. Sometimes the light comes from an unexpected source. You will find it when the time is right.
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Date: 6/2/2019 7:51:00 PM
She is with you, her hands upon yours. She has never let go. She is your guide. When you send an echo, and it drifts in the wind, it will always come back again. To You, to Your Heart. A scribble in the sand may fade away, but words stay upon the heart- for always. ~ Brandy
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Date: 6/2/2019 7:48:00 AM
such a moving piece LM, when I was reading this the song 'put you together again' by Hot Chocolate was on the radio' let's hope a poetic potter is willing to hold hands, so glad to see you posting again my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/2/2019 7:07:00 AM
This is really sad, and I hope he person is question finds a way to get out of this feeling... Nice to see you posting my friend..
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