The Christ Child

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THE CHRIST CHILD Starting with a visit from an angel Mary pondered his message in her heart The Christ Child is lying in the manger And that's how His ministry got its start Mary pondered his message in her heart Not knowing just how his message would end And that's how His ministry got its start How her heart would come to be so broken Not knowing just how his message would end The Christ Child is lying in the manger How her heart would come to be so broken Starting with a visit from an angel 16 January 2020 For the contest sponsored by Eve Roper Picture 1

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Wendy Watson

Date: 1/26/2020 3:34:00 AM

True food for thought in this,Curtis. I really enjoyed your meditative version for this contest and congratulations on your win.

Curtis Moorman
Date: 1/26/2020 7:23:00 AM

Thank you so much, Wendy, for this astute observation and the congrats. Thank you for visiting my work.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/25/2020 9:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your very well-deserved win, Curtis. I want to thank you for entering my contest.Your poem had great flow, perfect rhyme, and imagery. Hugs Eve

Curtis Moorman
Date: 1/25/2020 9:48:00 PM

Thank you, Eve, for your selecting my poem for placement in your contest.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 1/17/2020 3:53:00 PM

Great! Well thought out and written!

Curtis Moorman
Date: 1/17/2020 5:30:00 PM

Thanks, Tim! I always look for a response from you and I am never disappointed. I appreciate your support!

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 1/17/2020 3:38:00 PM

Such a great incarnation piece Curtis, excellent rhyme and great theme on the Christ child. Trust all well with you my friend, have a blessed 2020. God bless, Gordon

Curtis Moorman
Date: 1/17/2020 5:36:00 PM

Thank you, Gordon. Your comments are always uplifting and encouraging. I appreciate your support and your friendship. I remember you in my prayers and pray that 2020 will be a great year for you.