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The Cardinal and the Rose

Light snow hushes the drab, winter sky as she places a small white rose upon the gravestone of her innocent one lost in the early bloom of her life. A singular chirping song resounds within drooping arms of frozen trees she spies a spritely cardinal bird flitting to and fro, like a red ribbon flag. Her silent tears fall, in pure petals flow her grief is laid bare in rose’s thorns when whirring wings of the cardinal come to carry her rose away towards the sun. 1/7/2023

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Date: 3/19/2023 5:50:00 AM
A bittersweet scene! Well written, Laura!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/20/2023 2:06:00 PM
Thank you, Kim! Glad you liked this one! :)
Date: 3/17/2023 10:00:00 PM
So lovely and profound. The melancholy of loss is enhanced by the snow and frozen trees, but the mourner sees a glimmer of hope as the cardinal flies the rose sunward, echoing the journey of the little one's soul toward heaven. So beautiful and a Fav for me. Hugs ~ John
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/18/2023 12:01:00 PM
Hi John! Thanks for stopping by! So happy you liked this poem and I am honored that you faved it! :)
Date: 3/4/2023 1:55:00 AM
This is a great but very poignant read Lara. Its as if you have directed the opening scene from a film with your words. A great use of the title too. Cheers - Gary
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/9/2023 7:44:00 AM
Thank you for commenting, Gary. I really appreciate it! :)
Date: 1/18/2023 7:44:00 PM
So mournful and poignant, Laura, this brings a tear, and the last line brings a sliver of comfort~
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/22/2023 9:26:00 PM
Thank you for commenting, Michelle. Glad you liked this one! :)
Date: 1/17/2023 2:07:00 PM
Laura, this grief and hope is written with an elegant pen - just the right touch. It is one I will remember for its grace. Congratulations on your win. Blessings of song and grace to you.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/17/2023 3:57:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sam. appreciate your kind words! :)
Date: 1/14/2023 1:18:00 PM
Heartfelt poem but so lovely to allow us to share. Best for a win.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/15/2023 9:41:00 PM
Thank you, Victor! :)
Date: 1/8/2023 11:04:00 PM
Beautiful poem, so touching and heartfelt ! All the best in the contest dear Laura !
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/9/2023 1:03:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa! :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/9/2023 1:00:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa! :)
Date: 1/8/2023 4:21:00 AM
Beautiful, the cardinal is the carrier of her grieving love:)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/8/2023 12:43:00 PM
Thank you, Jo! :)

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