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The Cardinal and the Rose

He heard that she is poorly Yet does her best to cope Enduring life’s misfortunes While clinging on to hope. She strives to beat depression When winter’s hand turns cold And snowdrifts wrest her freedom She knows she’s getting old. She yearns for rays of sunshine (But skies are overcast) A word of consolation The warmth of seasons past. He quickly goes to visit, There finds her all alone Lost deep in contemplation And freezing to the bone. Her eyes light up on hearing His greeting wrapped in song He says “I have so missed you It’s here that I belong.” - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - The Cardinal & The Rose Contest Sponsored by Craig Cornish Placed 6th © 27th December, 2022

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Jack Horne

Date: 6/18/2023 4:02:00 AM

awww, this is beautiful. I hope all is well with you, my friend

Paul Callus
Date: 6/19/2023 4:50:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed it, my friend. So far, life is not too bad. Hope you too are keeping well Regards // paul

Gary Radice

Date: 1/22/2023 3:03:00 AM

Brilliant! Superb rhyming, flow, cadence and everything else that makes a poem great. And a happy, romantic ending as well. Thanks for posting. Cheers - Gary

Paul Callus
Date: 1/22/2023 11:20:00 AM

Thank you Gary for the very positive feedback which you sent I am humbled. ~ All the best for the week ahead. // paul

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/17/2023 2:12:00 PM

Wonderfully crafted poetic metaphor tinged with sadness and longing Paul. You paint such an amazing picture of plaintive melancholy but lift the whole poem up in your last two lines. Well done! Congratulations on your win! Blessings for 2023!

Paul Callus
Date: 1/17/2023 2:29:00 PM

Thank you, Sam, for your insightful comments. I wish you a happy and prosperous new year! Regards & blessings // paul

John Lawless

Date: 1/16/2023 4:39:00 PM

I detect a bit of melancholy metaphor herein Paul. Beautifully done.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/17/2023 11:43:00 AM

Indeed, John, you are correct. Pleased that you enjoyed....thank you. ~ Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/16/2023 8:04:00 AM

Back with "Congratulations" on your win. A wonderful story/write. Enjoy your win with blessings...............

Paul Callus
Date: 1/17/2023 11:34:00 AM

Thank you for being a herald of good news, Paula :) Your visit and comments are appreciated. Regards & Blessings // paul

Valsa George

Date: 1/3/2023 7:27:00 PM

So beautiful is this meeting of the Cardinal and the Rose. In her loneliness, he visited her and his presence and love gave her a new lease of life. Love and companionship can work wonders. Have a Blessed New Year, dear Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 1/6/2023 1:49:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by with these lovely insightful comments, Valsa. Hope the new year will treat you kindly. Blessings // paul

Susan Lawrence

Date: 12/31/2022 11:14:00 AM

I love this beautiful poem so much dear Paul. Sweetness wrapped in love. What could be better. Big hugs and all good wishes to you this New Years Eve ! Love,, Susan :)

Paul Callus
Date: 1/3/2023 8:49:00 AM

Thank you on all counts dear Susan. I hope you had a lovely Christmas, and that the New Year will bring you love, peace, good health and inspiration. ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/27/2022 12:24:00 PM

beautifully written, paul! all the best for a happy and healthy new year...

Paul Callus
Date: 12/27/2022 2:11:00 PM

Thank you, Ilene. I wish you all the very best for 2023...hoping it will be kinder than 2022. Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/27/2022 8:49:00 AM

A lovely write. I love both Red Cardinals and Pink Roses. Have a blessed day writing away................

Paul Callus
Date: 12/27/2022 9:10:00 AM

Thank you, Paula. At this time of year it's lovely to have someone stopping by :) Best regards // paul