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The Broken

There are those who are so broken There are those who are oh so lost They do not know what was spoken The price He paid it was sins cost There are those who are oh so lost They've never felt the love He gave The price He paid it was sins cost It's the only way He could save The never felt the love He gave Because of all the lies they heard It's the only way He could save When on the cross hung the Living Word Because of all the lies they heard We must speak the truth with love When on the cross hung the Living word We now have hope that's from above We must speak the truth with love They do not know what was spoken We now have hope that's from above There are those who are so broken For A RHYMING PANTOUM OF FIVE STANZAS Poetry Contest Sponsored by: L MILTON HANKINS Written 5/07/2022

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Date: 5/19/2022 3:07:00 PM
I see what you mean. You really can write a great pantoum, Charles. Christ's message is one of great love for all the world.
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Charles Reese
Date: 5/19/2022 10:17:00 PM
I'm very glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 5/18/2022 1:34:00 PM
Charles, your pantoum is excellent--well-written and deeply reverent in its description of the Lord's sacrificial love and those broken people who haven't realized . . . Janice
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Charles Reese
Date: 5/19/2022 10:17:00 PM
I;m glad you liked it.

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