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The Bomber

The Bomber knifes right through your guard You duck and weave, a bobbing loon Contentious crashing, bodies scarred His lightning fists cradle your doom Twelve timeless rounds against the champ His blinding hook you never saw The mildewed taste of canvas damp Burnt failure sticking in your craw Faint echoed cheers resounding deep Thick sweat and blood now sting your eyes Concealing bitter tears you weep To throw the towel in or rise Surrender is the only shame You stand and square with woozy smile There’s naught to lose now in life’s game Better the taste of blood than bile 6/19/16 ©Thomas W. Quigley Mostly iambic tetrameter

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Date: 6/20/2016 5:21:00 AM
Parallelism of boxing and life with great success! Tom, you certainly know of life but here an indication is that you know of boxing as well! A seven!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 6/20/2016 7:01:00 AM
Thank you, Demetrios!
Date: 6/19/2016 8:04:00 PM
I really like this Tom. I have always been a fan of you and Joe Lewis. Great metaphor too!
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Date: 6/20/2016 7:05:00 AM
Thanks, Daniel!
Date: 6/19/2016 5:29:00 PM
wow, I love how this is also a metaphor of life!! Great description in this one, Tom. I especially liked the line that used the word mildewed.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 6/20/2016 7:07:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea!

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