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The Bluebirds Whistle - a Modern Look At the Birds and the Bees

...the birds having nothing on you   each tasty morsel drips   deflowered pleasingly scoured then devoured     divine   your lips to mine   feelings so fine   I find     kindness caressed in kiss   late night hours dismissed   arousals arriving and thriving   inside it resides     touches pulsing with time   symphonics conduct   and seduct in interlude   but never concludes   stillness in tune     morning whispers   a rising sun smiles   and listens   as the bluebirds whistle

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Date: 8/11/2018 10:20:00 AM
Really gorgeous, Tim. Love your alliteration and interior rhymes.
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Date: 8/11/2018 2:22:00 AM
I love all versions of the birds and the bees!!! Nice!!
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Date: 8/10/2018 9:16:00 PM
Handing out my first ever best ever first line award. Congratulations! ;) xomo
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/10/2018 9:25:00 PM
It's an honor and I accept graciously

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