The Blue

the blue of these small lakes through the leaves so easily eases my heart and washes my soul

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Chris Hagy

Date: 3/26/2017 3:57:00 PM

Lovely read Thomas:) I am from the state of Great Lakes!...lots of soul washing here!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/25/2016 12:13:00 AM

a swift Tanka, Thomas... LINDA

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 9/4/2016 6:02:00 AM

Wow yes very refreshing n cool even just to read. Nice poem in brevity. Thumbs up. Nice to read from u again, pls do comment my latest poem on eclipse

Beverly Read

Date: 8/31/2016 12:52:00 PM

Oh my, I feel the same way. That's why I go back and look at some of my photos of lakes sometimes. Beautiful.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/28/2016 6:00:00 PM

Very beautiful Thomas you really do excel at this form:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2016 7:50:00 PM

this tanka is gorgeous. HAPPY Belated Birthday wishes, my friend.