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The Blind Date Itty Bitty

She dressed and make up for a party, A handsome guy is about to meet. Can't hide the excitement and thrill. She will no longer stay virgin. After living "no boyfriend since birth." The heaven answered all her prayers. When shake his hand to make impressed. She smile 'til ears, then false teeth slipped!

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Justin Bordner

Date: 4/13/2014 12:16:00 AM

The date goes on. J.A.B.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/14/2014 8:20:00 AM

lol... it's a blind date.. that goes on of course.. Thank you ,J.A.B!!

Jack Horne

Date: 4/12/2014 3:50:00 PM

LOL, had a good laugh at the surprise ending : )

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/14/2014 8:17:00 AM

Thank you, Jack.. Glad that you enjoyed it!! :O))

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/12/2014 9:33:00 AM

Good morning AiyaH.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/14/2014 8:16:00 AM

Hi Rick.. gOOd morNing!!! :O))

Paul Callus

Date: 4/12/2014 8:40:00 AM

I'm afraid this lady waited far too long....false teeth....legs....arms....??! no wonder it's a BLIND date too. // enjoyed to the full. gl in contest :) // paul

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/14/2014 8:14:00 AM

Hey Paul.. thanks a lot nice guy!! ^__^

Tim Smith

Date: 4/11/2014 7:14:00 PM

What a fun little ditty :-) :-)

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/14/2014 8:13:00 AM

Hey Tim.. Thank you ,dear friend!! =D

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/11/2014 5:58:00 PM

Not what I expected but most entertaining!

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/13/2014 3:31:00 AM

we wouldn't know what will happen next.. lol.. Thanks a lot! ;)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/11/2014 5:05:00 PM

:) LMAO!!! what an impression.. :D ++warm hellos from here olive eloisa God bless..

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/13/2014 2:51:00 AM

Thanks Olive... You're so pretty on your new avatar... grrr!! lol... :O))

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/11/2014 1:54:00 PM

.................... S - M - I - L - E ......................... (First place !!!) ......................L - O - V - E - I - T- !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - Have a lovely weekend with your beautiful princesses, dear friend AiyaH :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/11/2014 2:21:00 PM

:( ..anyways... I already add you in my eternal acct. in my heart.. Love you always!! <3 ,<3 <3 ^__^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2014 2:09:00 PM

- I do not have F.B. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2014 2:07:00 PM

Enjoy!! <3 <3 <3

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/11/2014 2:05:00 PM

do you have fb acct, Anne?... :O)) Linda and I were friends now in fb.. I hope we can be, too.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/11/2014 2:04:00 PM

Oh my G..!!!! You surprised me with this beautiful comment , my dear friend Anne Lise!!!! ...this is so cute!! ..(you know what?_ I'm having a hard time trying to copy this style... but it's only you can do it!! lol... ) Happy weekend to everyone of us!!! :o)) ..I'm gonna have 2 days off w/ my family... not actually to have a rest but to be their all time nanny, cook, and playmate... plus a mountain high laundry... BUT its OK!!! ..that's my happiness... hehe.... ^_^

Jan Allison

Date: 4/11/2014 1:43:00 PM

Hilarious! Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan - I've been writing about 'purity' too do drop by and see my collaboration poem Bronte Inspiration. Hug Jan

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/11/2014 1:45:00 PM

Thank you, Jan... you're so kind dear!!! Good luck to you, too. :o))