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The Blacksmith

A smile faint, but none the less It's there within his eyes, As the fire and the coals begin to burn. Now, his hand is on the hammer And the smoke begins to rise; Along with lasting memories that blacksmith's earn. Ten generations brought to him, Much more than just the tools, As he worked beside his father and the flame. Learning very quickly, It was not a trade for fools. For thoughts and iron blacksmiths must learn to tame. And though it's been so many years, The hammer fits him well, As the anvil reaches out to grasp his skill. He's the master, the creative art, That time cannot dispel. For he's never lost the blacksmith's flaming will.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/14/2014 10:31:00 AM
by the way, I saw your sweet soupmail and thought I would tell you here at your poem, I have been wanting to do a blog for a long time, letting people know how to find each other's poetry "by form." So I will try to make a blog about it sometime today. I hope you will check it out. It is SO useful to find particular poems of members this way!!
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Date: 6/14/2014 10:30:00 AM
robert, this is a nice one for Father's Day. I don't suppose it is your dad, but it was someone's dad and a very skilled profession to be proud of. the way you were using the word "flame" I think you could form a poem for Nette's contest using this same topic but doing it in Nette's poetic style for her contest. You should try (unless you already entered the flame contest for her!!)
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Robert Nehls
Date: 6/15/2014 1:09:00 AM
No, he is not my dad but a very good friend. It is a great profession and one that teaches many of life's lessons. Thanks for the suggestions on the contest. As always I look forward to your comments.... Robert.
Date: 6/10/2014 8:21:00 PM
This is wonderful Robert so descriptive and flows well...Tim
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Robert Nehls
Date: 6/10/2014 8:45:00 PM
I appreciate your comments, Tim. I'm kind of happy with this one because watching that old blacksmith pounding out some metal after so many years. Well, it was such an inspiration. I'm glad you liked it, Tim......Robert.
Date: 6/10/2014 5:43:00 PM
I love this write my friend!!!! Bravo and bravooo!!!!
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Robert Nehls
Date: 6/10/2014 8:39:00 PM
Thanks Robert. This a true story about a blacksmith friend of mine. He came from 10 generations of blacksmiths from Denmark. It was amazing watching him when we fired up that forge. I'm glad you liked it Robert......Robert.

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