The Best Poem I'Ve Ever Read
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For my two daughters nineteen and twenty-two years old. They have taught me so much and have made me a better man. I use to tell them when they were young "If I asked heaven for two perfect daughters they would not have even near as amazing as you"! I love my daughters with every pore of my body. I am blessed!
I learnt a long time ago.....art depends on how the person
experiencing your work perceives it...........so please don't
get upset...........how someone............judges your poetry
it is but the perception of one person..........a singular look
how one person looks at what you wrote....... .....when my
daughter...when my daughter was five........only five years
old...she built me....... .......a poem..........that is what she
told me.."daddy I built you a pome".....I can tell you it is to
this day the best poem I have ever read.....better than any
of the masters...........better than any famous modern poet
even Shakespeare....could not compete...... ....with a poem
written......by a five year old girl.............I will share it with
you now...you may or may not agree with me........that it is
the best poem you ever read......the poem my five year old
daughter built for me is this..."daddy i love you so so much"
...she even included an internal rhyme..."so"with "so"and to
this very day...........it is the best poem.....I have ever read
so you see....art is subjective....it lives based on perception
01~22~2015
With My Love
Armand
Copyright © Maurice Yvonne | Year Posted 2015
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