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The Awakening - a Video Poem

Awakened by the creaking of the dying trees In this barren land devoid of a breeze Imprisoned dreams in a land of unpicked seams Endless chasms of regrets in which no sunlight beams Broken chords strumming tunelessly in solitude Of songs of praises by an adoring multitude Intruding reflections oppress thoughts that soar Waltzing through his mind she invades once more Time when they were darlings of virtuosic impression Dancing in wild abandon to a public adoration Truly enamoured in each other, their love did blossom Though, in Life’s carousel sadly far too often Pursuing perfection whatever may befall One loses focus in the fluster of a fall Adorning false crowns in high esteem Ego soars and plummets and shatters the dream In the drop of a pin - displeasure he perceives past idolising could not now appease the icy cold rejection she projects as she flees leaving a broken man - who has failed to please For many long years he lays wishing death’s end Dwelling on memories of his so-called friends Friends he thought steadfast who chose to ignore his whispered words ‘forgive me I implore’ Shunned he was before his knees hit the floor After long years of solitude one day he awakens Finding his dark soulless days have been forsaken Terrors of the night have been released - set free From an unsuspecting sky all dark clouds flee Dark night of the soul heralds White Light of the Self Perceptions of enlightenment an awakening of himself From the corner of his eye a movement he detects A woman of the White Light he strongly suspects In her iridescent persona to her task she ascends His vulnerability she sees and her hand she extends And in a confetti of star showers his heart she mends
Copyright © Nov 2020 Maria Williams

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Date: 12/26/2020 1:09:00 AM
This poetic dramatic narration is excellent, Maria, and so is the video. Memories, broken dreams, heartbreak, and final illumination combine to deliver a delightful, captivating poem. (I like the sound of drums stressing ‘the fluster of a fall…knees hit the floor’). ~ Hope you had a lovely Christmas day. ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul
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Date: 11/19/2020 5:46:00 PM
That is so beautifully done and your words come to life on their own volition. Thank you for sharing this perfect verse and historical perfection.
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Date: 11/22/2020 1:14:00 AM
Thanks Pixie, so glad you liked it. I appreciate your lovely visit and comment my friend....Maria Hugs
Date: 11/19/2020 3:42:00 PM
WOW!! I love your creativity in the film, Incredibly beautiful creatures and overall everything is perfect from start to finish... Magnificent, my beautiful poetess friend...xoxo
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Date: 11/19/2020 5:16:00 PM
Thanks Kina , I cant take credit for the video though, all credit goes to Ron and the reader. They made my words come alive. Thanks for the visit my sweet friend....Maria Hugs
Date: 11/18/2020 12:08:00 AM
From what would I start! The power of words! The stunning impressive visual! The dilemma of human nature and complexities in relationships! Human souls stumbling in the void and dryness of a barren solitude.. soaring egos that exhaust minds and hearts.. Dark and Light among other dualities ever shaking the core of Humanity.. Awakening, the beautiest of remedies! deeper knowing would mend ignorance and vanity.. the purest of a soul! How we long to ascend! A huge WOW for a true beautiful spiritual poetry that knows no boundaries to dive into and embark on a journey of AWAKENING! A great beautiful soul of a great mastery of poetry to ink so eloquently profound thoughts and genuine feelings! An immense pleasure to read and see your exquisite work dearest Maria! My deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.
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Date: 11/19/2020 5:20:00 PM
That you visited is so awesome Besma my sweet dear friend. I know how busy you are, I truly appreciate the glowing review, thank you a thousand times. I cannot take all the credit though, this was a fun project shared by 3, Ron and the amazing reader Kelvin. They made my words come alive....Maria Love and Hugs
Date: 11/17/2020 3:34:00 PM
Yes, I remember this beauty. A literary and visual treat for the heart. Loved it again....
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Date: 11/17/2020 7:51:00 PM
So glad you liked it Carole. Thanks for visiting my dear....Maria Hugs
Date: 11/17/2020 8:20:00 AM
I remember this one well, one of your finest writes... You made made a good video to accompany it..
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Date: 11/17/2020 7:52:00 PM
Thanks Si, so glad you liked it....Maria Hugs
Date: 11/17/2020 8:07:00 AM
beautifully presented! :)
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Date: 11/17/2020 7:52:00 PM
Thanks Susan, so happy you like it....Maria Hugs
Date: 11/17/2020 7:11:00 AM
Great video and concept...a poetic story. Love the creativity of it...
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Date: 11/17/2020 7:53:00 PM
It was a fun project all around. Thanks Arturo, glad you liked it....Maria Hugs
Date: 11/17/2020 6:17:00 AM
Stunning and sweet. I love this. God bless you dear friend with many more such gems
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Date: 11/17/2020 7:54:00 PM
Thanks Regina, so glad you liked it....Maria Hugs
Date: 11/17/2020 5:28:00 AM
Magnificent drama in your video and words, Maria. As always, you created a wonderful story shining in love, heartbreak, and ultimately reconciliation. A beautiful, artistic rendering!
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Date: 11/17/2020 7:55:00 PM
You summed it up beautifully Vijay. Thanks for the glowing reviews, I really appreciate them my friend....Maria Hugs

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