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"The Autopsy" They wheeled his body into the room. Covered with a clean white sheet. The doctors were methodical, yet at the same time quite discreet. They studied it in sections, one area at a time. and although their search was thorough, there were a few things they could not find. They couldn't find the memory of the one he loved so dear, and they couldn't find the passion that he felt when she was near. They couldn't find his pride, or the bounce within his step. Though the smile he had when he saw her hasn't left him yet. And they couldn't find the pleasure that he felt year after year. And if they searched his entire body they would never find it there. Yes the body was being studied to try and find a clue. Why his life had ended early, why his life on earth was through. The doctors with all their training didn't know where to start. For they couldn't have known she left him ......... and he died from a broken heart. <<< Cal Bambi "The word artist" ©riginal >>> I paint pictures with Words calbambi@gmail.com

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Date: 2/14/2021 4:27:00 PM
Exceptional poetry. Brings to mind the book “The Poet, The Warrior, The Prophet”.
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Date: 2/12/2021 6:24:00 PM
Wow, a FAVE! A pleasure to find this beautifully penned poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Cal~
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Date: 2/7/2020 10:31:00 AM
Hello Cal Bambi, Hi, I just read my soup mail. Okay I like the poem you created enjoyedto read it. This poem is sad because he died of a broken heart.She left him and he died of broken heart. So sad. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 8/13/2019 3:59:00 PM
Wow. Excellent write. I had to read it several times... I enjoyed it... so very sad and moving. Ann
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Date: 7/27/2019 6:26:00 AM
Great poetry..
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Date: 7/27/2019 8:16:00 AM
Thank you, I had to edit it my spell checker is crazy. If you would like to see lots of my poetry Google calbambi1's reading list.... See Ya

Book: Shattered Sighs