The Arrival Of Night

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Magic Nine
Created by Divena Collins. A 9 line- poem that doesn't have any rules as to meter or syllable count... with a rhyme scheme of: abacadaba.

Dusk unveils the stars, at last light; when blue morphs into ebony. Silhouettes slowly fade from sight, and shifting shadows merge as one heralding the approach of night. Affirming that day's reign is done, chameleon clouds shed their white. And Luna rises splendidly as darkness saturates the night.

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Ink Empress

Date: 12/12/2023 6:25:00 AM

“ Scarlet bleeds from a dying sun, affirming that its reign is done.” this is just beyond deep and artistic what you’ve delivered there in such a poetic manner. I love the way you’ve written using alliterations and colors here . So captivating as always. Congratulations on being placed in brians contest

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/12/2023 7:21:00 AM

Thank you so much Ink Empress, you never fail to bring a smile to my day, my friend, Emile.

Lin Lane

Date: 11/29/2023 6:11:00 AM

This is an appealing new form that is enhanced by your creative lines of day giving way to night, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/29/2023 6:50:00 AM

Thanks, Lin, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.