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The Animal Orphanage

Work in progress....sorry. will repost soon

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/28/2024 3:25:00 PM

your poem was both informative and sad. The capturing and imprisoning of animals for long periods of time I find inhumane and unkind. In my heart of hearts, I believe freedom is an inherent part of any of God's creatures, not just humans. I shudder when I stop and think. Well done. Wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/28/2024 2:06:00 PM

- Life in captivity is the worst form of existence because every living being, whether animal or human, was created to be free - Unfortunately, all too often we come across stories of animals that end up spending their lives in chains or cages and never get the chance to experience freedom ... terribly sad - A great poem ... I hope it can open our eyes and see what is happening - hugs

Silent One

Date: 3/28/2024 11:31:00 AM

Your excellent poem is a poignant exploration of the moral complexities of zoos and the ethical implications of human intervention in the natural world. It challenges the reader to confront uncomfortable truths about our relationship with animals and the consequences of our actions on their well-being.. Powerful words my friend.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/28/2024 7:45:00 AM

Hello Marugu, your depiction of transported me into a world where the wild meets captivity. The scent of decay mingles with the anticipation of danger as wardens guide visitors through narrow pay-gates. Yet amidst the tension, glimpses of boredom and displacement emerge the complexities of confinement. Your poetic words invite reflection on the delicate balance between preservation and captivity, where empathy finds a place to dwell even in the heart of danger. - Blessings, Daniel

Tom Woody

Date: 3/28/2024 5:59:00 AM

All of them terribly out of place. I think we all share mixed feelings on the caging of animals, but mostly disgust, I think. Still, they fascinate. Awesome poem

Tom Woody
Date: 3/28/2024 6:08:00 AM

Glad to hear released. I once wrote an interesting poem on Masai Mara, from the viewpoint of the animals. Not sure I still have it

Marugu Mo
Date: 3/28/2024 6:02:00 AM

Hi Tom. This poem is a work in progress. The orphanage is a rescue center where they bring them for treatment, observation and tagging. Eventually they are released. The sokoke cats am not so sure though