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The 4 seasons

Blossoms bloom, breeze serenades, Nature's revival, life unfolds, Fields verdant, new birth, Spring joy, birds sing. Golden fields sway, gracefully, Metaphor for life, vibrantly, Sun warms, body, soul, Summer light, shining bright. Rustling leaves, Autumn hues, Harvest time, cycle renewed. Share food, thanksgiving bond, Gratitude sown, soul fed. Snowy white, winter's hush, Whispers secrets, year ends. Quiet snow, serenity pause, Nature's cycle , eternal laws.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/14/2024 3:36:00 PM

your poem contained some beautiful imagery ('gold fields sway) and sensory detail (sun warms the body and soul) Your poem was smooth and beautifully captured nature's seasons as well as the seasons of life. Well done, Jay. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/14/2024 11:42:00 AM

Dear Jay, your poem is a beautiful journey through nature's grand dance! Each verse captures the essence of the season perfectly, from the blossoming joy of spring to the quiet hush of winter. I love how you use imagery ("verdant fields," "golden fields sway gracefully") and sensory details ("breeze serenades," "sun warms, body, soul") to bring each season to life. The poem's flow is smooth and natural, mirroring the changing seasons. You have a true talent for capturing the magic of the world around us. - Blessings, Daniel

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/14/2024 11:05:00 AM

- Lovely written, Jay :) - hugs