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Thawing

Passion sweeps my body, As I feel you drawing near; And though I may not see you, I can always sense you’re here; I feel your hands engulf me, Your embrace breaks all resolve; The chains that keep me prisoner, Are beginning to dissolve; I’ve tried to fight these feelings, But the battle now is lost; The ice that held me captive, Is beginning to defrost…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/15/2014 4:52:00 PM
Hello Tirzah, first things first. Hi, I was happy to hear from you. About your poem: WOW! To fight such a feeling. hehehe, that's what happens when passion accumulates near the heat... Well done. The imagery's breathtaking ""your hands engulf me""... Thawing at its best... XOX..Linda
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Date: 7/15/2014 3:57:00 PM
Hi Tirzah, this is such a deep, powerful beautiful write. Well done! Best wishes.
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