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That's a No

As the lamp shines so brightly I sense her heartbeat potently She sighs with delight Turns out the light And says no, way too gently
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/8/2017 9:16:00 AM
Lol nice limerick
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Date: 10/5/2017 10:20:00 AM
Great limerick Russell, rejection is never nice..
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Date: 10/5/2017 3:51:00 AM
- Great limerick, Russell - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/4/2017 5:43:00 PM
Better she says it gently than strongly!! Nicely rhymed, Russell
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Date: 10/4/2017 3:10:00 PM
I enjoyed your Limerick Russell.
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Date: 10/4/2017 3:03:00 PM
russell, you are om a limerick roll... what fun it is to see this side of you!... keep the lamplight glowing... wow!..huggs
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Date: 10/4/2017 11:37:00 AM
Simple and honest. Good one.
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