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That Slow Green Burn

Fire at the edge of the world. Eyes deep within the shoreless forest sea, Witnesses of the most ancient ways Watch smoke rising from the approaching front Of treeless, naked land Stripped bare by blind ambition, Quietly await the end. Five thousand acres a day The last great garden drifts into the skies To join the circling storms that once nourished it. The fires lick and crawl their way Into its green heart. Fire is eating the soul of the world Reducing the face of its childhood to ash; - Behold here the sorrow of Eden's last relic Becoming the charnel-house of Creation.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 2/28/2009 6:49:00 AM
Congratulations on a outstanding poem of the week! Laura :)
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Date: 2/27/2009 6:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Bill. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/25/2009 12:56:00 PM
I just introduced myself to your poetry and have enjoyed reading your work. Cograts on being featured this week. -Jason
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Date: 2/25/2009 8:49:00 AM
William congrats on having your poetry featured this week - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/25/2009 8:40:00 AM
Much to think about here, Very interesting piece..Thoughtfully expressed and well penned.Congratulations on having your poetry being featured this week.God Bless *Tyesha
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Date: 2/24/2009 9:12:00 AM
Congratulations William on "That Slow Green Burn" being featured this week. Vince
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Date: 2/23/2009 3:53:00 PM
Much for the reader to think about in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured! I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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