That night

That night, the sky was pulchritudinous just like you, The moon,the stars and I were gossiping about you. The moon blabbered how beautiful stars he has with him, Shining like diamonds. I,then, bragged a little about you, Teasing the moon saying," I also have a star like you". He didn't believe me until I showed him your smile, Which was mesmerizing and divine. The moon grinned, As he saw my cheeks getting redden. I smiled back and said," isn't my star radiant and bright?" The moon giggled and replied, "Yes, he truly is a beautiful sight".

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Benjamin Bartley

Date: 5/14/2024 8:11:00 PM

Wow, I had to look up that word. Thank you for enriching my vocabulary and how you personify the moon and the sun and maybe, a lover? Fascinatingly wonderful. Made me want to reread it over and over!

Aaysha Ali
Date: 5/16/2024 7:04:00 PM

Awweeee! Thank youu. I truly appreciate your beautiful and sweet comment. Haha! I am a lover in my delusions.

Eisha Shahzad

Date: 5/14/2024 4:02:00 PM

This is so creatively crafted and made. It's a beautiful poem. I hope u produce more mesmerizing and intriguing poems like this

Aaysha Ali
Date: 5/16/2024 7:02:00 PM

Thank youu! I appreciate your beautiful and sweet comment. I will surely upload more of my works.

Beata Agustin

Date: 4/3/2024 12:15:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.