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That Mindful Moment

I paused. I heard the wind whistle The leaves stir. The birds call to rest In the great trees. Setting down My burden (that old backpack called life) I rubbed my shoulders Relief at last. I had not noticed Numbed to the pain Until this moment. And the deliciousness Of it made My toes tingle My lips smile, My feet do a happy step In that mindful moment Because I paused.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/24/2016 6:49:00 PM
Very nice poem
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Date: 2/12/2016 9:36:00 PM
VALERIE, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 6/12/2015 1:28:00 AM
Hi Val, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Date: 6/11/2015 9:26:00 AM
Sounds very nice , because its peaceful
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Date: 6/10/2015 6:59:00 AM
This life wraps us up in ourselves, and to pause awhile is good for the soul. Lovely verse, Valerie, and congrats on being a fellow poet of the week. Viv x
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Date: 2/3/2015 10:21:00 AM
Super write. I could feel the excitement. daver
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