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That Delicious Something

It started off simple enough - a peck on the cheek. (nothing tantalizing by any means) But then she did that delicious something ... that made my whole body weak. And before any could protest, with their carefully organized rebuttals, all Common Sense ran for the hills, but I was already at the peak with knees still eager for the bend, and eyes on high alert for her nature's next flirt. A well-made umbrella (just in case) when my Curvaceous Cinderella cascades with her rain of buttons (Mr. Frankie S. never would have guessed this kind of monsoon) ... and everything just begins to bloom in vibrant color. When she does that delicious something it is like none other. And my inner being just melts; an ice cream cone on a summer sidewalk sugar streams trailing wherever they may, as ants find their natural attraction, a similar thing takes place with an altogether different kind of animal. And I'm absolutely gung-ho to wherever it may go. When she does that special something, and the Seraphim of old begin to sing, it's like a gaggle of goosebumps flooding the surface area honking their satisfaction; saliva-esque rivers to nourish a barren wasteland. Life has sprung deliciously anew in my surprising thoughts of you. She takes me by the hand to the precipice of my prudishness as a light evening breeze (her whispering tease) upsets my balance - and victory over vertigo - I jump into everything into nothing When she does that delicious something.

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Date: 3/18/2016 11:31:00 AM
This is one of the bright part of a moody day as today for me. I am blessed reading this piece. Keep on writing lovely. cheers!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/19/2016 11:55:00 PM
Thanks so much, Funom! You as well :)
Date: 3/15/2016 10:02:00 AM
Oh! my lovely romantic friend really it's delicious, beautifully penned with upset balance. 7 i feel. Loved always, bl
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/16/2016 4:47:00 PM
Thank you BL. There's always those people that tip the scales ;)
Date: 3/14/2016 6:01:00 PM
My my my; one's imagination can surely soar with "That special something" how creative.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/15/2016 12:06:00 AM
That was my intention, dear Iris. Glad you enjoyed :)
Date: 3/14/2016 12:52:00 PM
Enjoyed reding your creative work..I wonder what that something is??Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/14/2016 11:42:00 PM
I will leave that to your imagination, Sarah. Thanks for your comments.
Date: 3/13/2016 8:29:00 PM
Wow ! WoW! WoW!...I am so much in love with this piece...Highly applaudable..! You are definetly gifted Timothy...This poem is very sensual and I am delighted to post my comments...hats off..Love Red I want more of this kind....:)
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/14/2016 11:38:00 PM
Your spontaneous reaction is a delight to me. I don't always write romanticism, but it's fun to mix things up. Thanks as always, my friend.
Date: 3/13/2016 1:56:00 AM
Very sensual and playful. That delicious something has me intruiged. Fun poem,Timothy.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/14/2016 11:28:00 PM
Thanks Suz :)
Date: 3/12/2016 8:15:00 PM
wow, Timothy. Now I recall a time you said you had no girlfriend. HAve things changed since then? You sure do seem to understand the falling in love aspect really well by now!! This is delicious!!!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/14/2016 11:16:00 PM
Sorry to disappoint, Andrea, but the status has remained the same (though the imagination, might have increased ... ha ha ha). Happy to have shared a tasty morsel your way ... even if fantasy ;)
Date: 3/12/2016 4:58:00 PM
a delicious concoction of imagery Timothy romantic and sensual - fabulous poem i just hope its true:-) :-) a 7 from me:-) hugs Jan xx
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/14/2016 11:03:00 PM
Thanks for the tasty comment, Jan. Hope I don't spoil the mood if I tell you that it's fictional (imagination gets the best of us)...
Date: 3/12/2016 4:20:00 PM
First time I've read something this romantic (and eroctic) from you, Timmy! Love some of the similes and metaphors you use. I've written something of one of my very first experiences with love but it's tame (maybe moribund) compared to yours. Don't explode in flames by it. / M
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/14/2016 10:36:00 PM
It was a bit out of my comfort zone, to tell you the truth. I was attempting to expand my horizons. It might surprise some of the people here, but this is just a work of fiction --- maybe my imagination just gets the best of me. Happy you enjoyed nonetheless.
Date: 3/12/2016 4:15:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading this piece . So much so I read it again...A lot in there to take in..and expressed so well its demands a second read. It captured my attention. I found it unique, fun and well..a damn good piece of poetry keep writing youve got it!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/14/2016 10:17:00 PM
Humbled by your comments, Angie. Thank you very much, and I appreciate the enthusiasm. I found your poetry to be engaging as well.
Date: 3/12/2016 9:41:00 AM
Are you still floating there, Timothy? What a delightful poem that makes me want to roll back the years and experience youth's gushing rush of fresh love once again! #7 Regards // paul
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/14/2016 1:32:00 PM
Floating might be a good word to describe ... haha. How else does one get to the moon and back? I believe it's about mindset mostly ... only old as you feel, as they say. Appreciate the 7, Paul.
Date: 3/12/2016 8:42:00 AM
I just have to say it again you really know how to pull your readers along through the whole story, you make me feel a part of the entire scenario, you put me there. Great job my friend
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/14/2016 1:26:00 PM
Happy to know the words were immersive. Love your comments, my friend. Thanks for stopping by.
Date: 3/12/2016 5:31:00 AM
What a delight it is when the heart tantalizes the soul dear, Timothy! Wonderfully done! Enjoyed!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/14/2016 1:15:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios. Tantalizing, indeed!
Date: 3/12/2016 1:24:00 AM
"And I'm absolutely gung-ho to wherever it may go." I like that! Loving this poem, Timothy. Love the icecream cone bit as well.."ugar streams trailing wherever they may, as ants find their natural attraction" Awesome lines. Yes, leave that "delicious something" to our imaginations, while trying to describe the natural inner feelings. It's seriously a treat reading your work. Always, Laura
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/14/2016 1:08:00 PM
It's seriously a treat reading your lovely comments, Laura :) The inner feelings, I felt, were more important to describe, as in the end that's what will stick with you most.

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