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Thank You

Everything is spiraling Nothing solid to grab onto I’ve lost my faith in people To him, I say thank you I feel like I’m losing control Like everything is falling apart There’s a hollow, empty feeling In place of my heart I don’t know what to do I don’t know how to feel okay I feel like I can’t breathe I want it all to go away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/8/2011 9:28:00 AM
Desolate, in a poetic way. Written with real feeling. Excellent.
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Date: 5/7/2011 10:38:00 PM
I like when poetry makes me stop and focus when I'm done reading it. This was the case here. Thank you, and I mean that. ;)
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