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Ten Lines, Five Words

TEN LINES - FIVE WORDS Your smile is so bright It lights up my night The radiance of your face Causes my heart to race Your kisses are like honey They make my life sunny You're one of a kind You make my life shine God made you so divine And I'm glad you're mine 31 March 2019 For the contest sponsored by Lu Loo

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Date: 4/22/2019 5:06:00 AM
Sweet lines you wrote, congrats alkas.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 4/22/2019 6:44:00 AM
Thank you so much for stopping by and reading my work. This is our "first meeting" and I appreciate your support.
Date: 4/10/2019 5:27:00 AM
those last 2 lines were my fave, you have such a way with words dear Curtis, you are the best. Thank you and congrats! -luloo
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 4/10/2019 6:13:00 AM
Thanks, luloo! I try to keep Him in most of the poems I write. Without Him, I would be nothing and I would not be afforded the honor of having friends like you to grace my presence.
Date: 4/7/2019 1:56:00 PM
Sweet as can be, and a well deserved win, my friend. Congratulations
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 4/10/2019 6:16:00 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea, and please forgive my late response. I have approximately 12 favorite poets whom I won't name in case it turned out to be more or if I left out a name. Just suffice it to say that you number among them.
Date: 4/6/2019 12:38:00 PM
Sweet, Curtis.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 4/7/2019 7:30:00 PM
Thanks again, Line! I am so pleased to share a win with so many great artists
Date: 4/1/2019 6:42:00 AM
So sweet it belongs it a Valentine's greeting card. Well done, Curtis.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 4/1/2019 9:35:00 AM
Thanks, Line! What a great compliment. I'll see if Hallmark or American Greeting will accept it. lol
Date: 3/31/2019 4:03:00 PM
aww Curtis so beautiful and romantic, a joy to read your lovely rhyme:-) hugs Jan xx
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 4/1/2019 9:35:00 AM
Thanks, Jan! I responded by Soup Mail

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