Get Your Premium Membership

Ten Commandments To Win Her Heart Forever

Hide and seek Seek then hide Ask and refuse Refuse then ask Be the fan-belt Discover her springs Warm up her autumns Heat up her winters Cool down her summers Then pamper, flatter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/2/2019 3:53:00 PM
I like the tone, Solomon: Commandments, yes---but light, not heavy-handed. Nicely done! ~ gw
Login to Reply
Ochwo-Oburu Avatar
Solomon Ochwo-Oburu
Date: 8/3/2019 3:32:00 AM
A pleasure to read your comments, Gershon
Date: 6/10/2019 1:14:00 AM
I like the image of being a fan belt. Kind wishes, Kai
Login to Reply
Ochwo-Oburu Avatar
Solomon Ochwo-Oburu
Date: 6/12/2019 10:16:00 AM
You make me great, Michael. Thanks
Ochwo-Oburu Avatar
Solomon Ochwo-Oburu
Date: 6/12/2019 10:16:00 AM
You make me great, Michael. Thanks

Book: Shattered Sighs