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Ten: a Dark Love Story

I travel in time twenty-five years And see my lover in the passenger seat Shifting currents gliding us toward The tangled fates that we must meet So many reasons why to go But I can't see beyond these walls of stone The oceans between us only grow And who we are truly can't be known You hold out a tattered glove And remember the coming winter chill I scratch out your name on the wall And meekly accept my morning pill I will send you a thought like a butterfly That at least we're both still alive You will chase it away with a whispering hand The very moment it does arrive August 27, 2016 For "Rock 'n Roll Rhyme Fest" poetry contest

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Date: 9/18/2016 1:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I like 'chasing it away with a whispering hand. And yet the moment arrives. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 9/17/2016 5:12:00 PM
Andrew - congratulations on a worthy placement! If I was writing for this contest there's a good chance I would have grabbed something from 10 as inspiration and a better chance it would have read similar to yours. You nailed this and was a perfectly smooth write. I read it several times and each time was a pleasure
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Andrew Jacob Jung
Date: 9/17/2016 8:06:00 PM
Thank you! Very fun contest.

Book: Shattered Sighs