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Tanka

TANKA Contrails streak the sky. Vaporous cotton Left by silver dots in a hurry. My mind takes flight, but My feet are grounded.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/11/2018 1:00:00 PM
Happens ro my mind often Oliver :)
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 4/11/2018 1:12:00 PM
Hello FJ, I work in a non-creative job and sometimes have the opportunity to day dream and I wrote this during one of my day dream moments. Oliver
Date: 3/21/2018 10:08:00 PM
Very pleasant tanka, Oliver.
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 3/22/2018 5:08:00 AM
Thank you Line. Oliver
Date: 12/30/2017 7:28:00 AM
I like this one Oliver. Nice line, left by silver dots in a hurry :)
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 12/30/2017 7:39:00 AM
Thank you Heidi. Oliver
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 12/30/2017 7:39:00 AM
Thank you Heidi. Oliver

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