Tanka 5

Tanka 5 you sit across the room velvet chair against your skin one of the Graces Beauty, Delight, or Blossom perhaps all three in the flesh

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Sharon Ruebel

Date: 10/22/2013 11:45:00 AM

Hello Jack, A very lovely and moving tribute to our fair sex. I loved this one. It made me smile and deeply inhale.... SMiles, Shar

Jack Jordan
Date: 10/22/2013 11:52:00 AM

I'm glad it did so... Jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2013 12:06:00 AM

oh lala. I love that idea of all three graces. This is wonderful. And I just know you can come up with a tiger!!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/3/2013 5:29:00 PM

You are a romantic, a beautiful write.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/3/2013 1:25:00 PM

this is such a beautiful piece, so romantic and very moving... i just love the last line "perhaps all three in the flesh.." a brilliant way to end the piece...dis i mention how subtly sensual this is?...:) huggs