Tanka 11

Tanka 11 prickly pear islands frost-silvered prairie grassland horses grazing their exhaled cloud-breath floating low in autumn’s cold morning light Written 11.07.2013 for Francine Roberts’ contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2013 1:00:00 AM

a great autumn entry, Jack!

Jack Jordan
Date: 11/9/2013 9:12:00 AM

Thanks... Also on the trip south to Dallas. It was a good haiku/tanka morning...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/8/2013 11:10:00 AM

Beautiful picture! Good luck in the contest.

Jack Jordan
Date: 11/8/2013 11:14:00 AM

Thanks, Richard... jack

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/8/2013 4:37:00 AM

You have created nice picture of the autumn apt images, Jack

Donna Jones

Date: 11/7/2013 10:20:00 AM

Jack..a picture I can so easily visualize ..beautiful!

Jack Jordan
Date: 11/8/2013 8:12:00 AM

Thanks, Donna. 'Tis the season... Jack

Poet Tacito

Date: 11/7/2013 10:05:00 AM

You capture nature like only a few poets I know. Mother Nature bows to you sir.

Jack Jordan
Date: 11/8/2013 8:11:00 AM

Thank you Drake, for the lovely compliment... Jack