Tanka 10

Tanka 10 richly colored kiss... hair-wisp falling on your face in twilight half-light the moment I first knew you the moment you first knew me

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Date: 11/3/2013 10:08:00 AM

allow me to swoon, jack... how affectionate this is..:) huggs

Jack Jordan
Date: 11/7/2013 9:13:00 AM

You're allowed...

Date: 11/2/2013 7:23:00 PM

You are great at expressing these moments Jack...

Date: 11/1/2013 1:00:00 AM

fanTAStic. What a great tanka.

Jack Jordan
Date: 11/1/2013 10:47:00 PM

Thanks, as always... Jack

Date: 10/31/2013 2:27:00 AM

Lovely, what a moment, so nicely captured.

Date: 10/26/2013 1:12:00 PM

Jack, your poem is beautiful and loving.. the moment love meets.. always..LINDA

Jack Jordan
Date: 10/26/2013 4:01:00 PM

Thank you, Linda, for the compliment... Jack

Date: 10/26/2013 11:43:00 AM

- Truth and romance.... lovely Tanka, Jack ! - - I wish you a nice weekend ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 10/26/2013 12:07:00 PM

Thanks, and a fun weekend to you as well... Jack