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Taking Care of You, Whose Taking Care of Me

Taking care of you, whose taking care of me You worry bout' my head and feet I worry bout' your liver and nails We take care of each other day by day and ways by ways Now sweet kisses adorn our necks An expression of our caring We're as young as ninety sleeping under the quilts Taking care of you, whose taking care of me

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Sharon Tideswell

Date: 7/16/2010 12:42:00 AM

Hi Susan, how sweet this is. Some people are indeed lucky that love endures all of life's ups and downs into old age. A lovely write that made me smile. (Just one little edit - the apostrophe on 'bout should be at the beginning of the word to denote the missing 'a'). Thanks for your comments on my acrostic ~ Sharon :)