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Swim

cooling ocean swim seeing bathing suits float by sharks attack again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Deb Radke
Date: 11/2/2018 10:16:00 AM
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You set this up wonderfully. Another favorite for me. Concise, poetic and surprising. Well done. Deb
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Warren Doll
Date: 11/4/2018 3:56:00 PM
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Deb, I'm so glad that you have read another one of my poems. Thanks for all of your positive comments, All the best~Warren
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J.W. Earnings
Date: 8/22/2018 1:19:00 AM
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A very great poem here
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Warren Doll
Date: 8/23/2018 8:22:00 AM
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Thanks JW. I'm glad that you liked it.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 7/21/2018 2:42:00 PM
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Giggles! Oh I just love it!! A fun and fabulous Senryu, Warren. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Warren Doll
Date: 7/22/2018 5:03:00 PM
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Susan, thanks for your positive comments and for your visit. All the best to you // Warren
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Becca Teagan
Date: 7/20/2018 11:37:00 PM
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lol Love it :)
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Warren Doll
Date: 7/21/2018 11:17:00 AM
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Glad that you liked it and thanks for the visit, Becca
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/13/2018 7:01:00 PM
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oh my!! SHark attack!!
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Warren Doll
Date: 7/15/2018 8:50:00 AM
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The oceans vulture only the attack first then clean up the oceans, Thanks for you visit , Andrea.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 7/10/2018 11:06:00 AM
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Oh no!!! Fun one Warren...
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Warren Doll
Date: 7/11/2018 8:37:00 AM
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Glad you liked it, Charlie Thanks
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/8/2018 2:56:00 AM
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I am laughing at the unexpected abruptness of the cooling ocean.
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Warren Doll
Date: 7/8/2018 9:09:00 AM
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I'm glad it made you laugh, Caren. // Warren:)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/6/2018 12:26:00 PM
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And I was hoping for skinny dipping, Oh Well Awesome, Warren!!
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Warren Doll
Date: 7/6/2018 4:50:00 PM
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Glad you liked it ,Mike.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/3/2018 8:07:00 AM
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- I do not dare ... to swim with sharks - A great Senryu, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Warren Doll
Date: 7/3/2018 11:42:00 AM
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Me either. I'm glad you liked it Anne-Lise. Sending a big hug your way. Warren:)
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Lyric Man
Date: 7/3/2018 7:15:00 AM
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It was going so beautifully until that last line ;)
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Warren Doll
Date: 7/3/2018 7:33:00 AM
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Thank you for your visit and comment, Lyric Man. //Warren.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/2/2018 10:07:00 PM
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They are awesome creature's indeed, we enter their domain at our own risk.Warm weather seems to bring them in closer to our shores and of course people head for the beach when its warm, a bad combination for sure. Tom
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Warren Doll
Date: 7/3/2018 7:30:00 AM
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Great comment, Tom. Thank you for your visit. // Warren
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/2/2018 6:03:00 PM
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I can hear the jaws music in my head Warren hugs jan xx
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Warren Doll
Date: 7/2/2018 6:44:00 PM
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Hi Jan, great to hear from you! Glad you liked it. All the Best-Warren

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