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For: Lanterne Frenzy contest #2

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Date: 7/11/2017 6:24:00 AM
Oh so this is a lanterne? How beautiful and your words - how they shine!! I really love what you've done with this Carole...Maria
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Carole Duet
Date: 7/13/2017 12:24:00 AM
Thanks, Maria. Yes, I find the lanterne one of the easier forms. Anyway, glad you "loved" it. Carole Duet :)
Date: 5/11/2017 7:05:00 PM
I like this poem that you wrote.A 7
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Carole Duet
Date: 5/12/2017 2:09:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene. I'm so glad you liked it. Carole Duet
Date: 4/29/2017 12:44:00 AM
Wow this is gorgeous , romantic and appealing. Awesome formatting as well. Kudos.
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Carole Duet
Date: 4/29/2017 5:44:00 PM
Wow! Thank you so much Zaynab. I'm so glad you liked it. Carole Duet
Date: 4/27/2017 11:03:00 PM
What a sweet piece of poetry into my favorites it goes. Good luck in the contest.
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Carole Duet
Date: 4/28/2017 2:32:00 AM
Thank you, Edward. :)
Date: 4/27/2017 8:33:00 AM
Wonderful lanternes, Carole! They fit so wonderfully together, great write, and good luck in the contest.
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Carole Duet
Date: 4/27/2017 9:13:00 PM
Thank you, Darren.
Date: 4/25/2017 6:59:00 PM
a lovely string of lanterne poems which flow so beautifully and on a subject I relate to so well!:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Carole Duet
Date: 4/26/2017 1:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan.
Date: 4/25/2017 9:13:00 AM
Nice one Carole ! Good luck in the contest :)
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Carole Duet
Date: 4/25/2017 6:42:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi.
Date: 4/25/2017 7:17:00 AM
I like how you sequenced your lanternes and how your poem flows. Good luck in the contest.
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Carole Duet
Date: 4/25/2017 6:43:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes. Carole Duet
Date: 4/25/2017 6:42:00 AM
Beautifully executed Lanterne ... Looks a winner ...
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Carole Duet
Date: 4/25/2017 6:44:00 PM
Thank you, Probir. Carole Duet
Date: 4/25/2017 5:51:00 AM
A fantastic piece of writing. The form is spot on and the subject one that really touches the reader. Your heart shines in this one Carole.
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Carole Duet
Date: 4/25/2017 6:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Chris. Carole Duet
Date: 4/25/2017 2:13:00 AM
Wow, Carole! A very impressive set of lanternes! The very best of luck to you!
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Carole Duet
Date: 4/25/2017 6:55:00 PM
P.S. And good luck to you too! :)
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Carole Duet
Date: 4/25/2017 6:54:00 PM
Thank you, Museo!

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