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Sweet Nothings

“The kids are fast asleep,” Bob whispers to his wife.” Ann smiles and mouths, “That’s great.” They go to get some snacks and drinks before they start a movie, with the volume set quite low. It’s chilly, so she whispers, “Honey, hand me that fleece throw? Come closer; we can share.” They watch and cuddle, sip and munch, and laugh about the silly movie but don’t dare get loud. They must not wake the kids. This is their time to be alone. Then halfway through the show, he whispers something in her ear. She says, "I love you, Babe." They hurry to turn lights and TV off—the second half can wait. They’ve better things to do! Each time he whispers those sweet nothings in her ear, she knows the night they share will be sublime. April 1, 2018, entered in the Heidi Sands Love Poem Contest November 17, 2018, entered in Lewis Raynes's Sexy Contest

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Date: 4/9/2018 1:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Janice.
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Date: 4/7/2018 2:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful dialogue poem of love. I enjoyed it.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/7/2018 8:07:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan! Janice
Date: 4/5/2018 9:20:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest Janice. Congratulations for your win :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/5/2018 11:51:00 AM
Thank YOU, Heidi! Janice
Date: 11/23/2017 2:32:00 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful win, Janice - keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/5/2018 11:51:00 AM
Thanks so much, Greg! Janice
Date: 11/21/2017 5:51:00 PM
What a sweet romantic poem Janice, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/21/2017 6:51:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jan! Janice
Date: 11/19/2017 10:24:00 PM
Ah... recognized a winner. Congrats, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/20/2017 7:16:00 AM
THANK YOU, Line! Janice
Date: 11/17/2017 10:05:00 AM
That's sweet, Janice. Good luck with the contest.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/17/2017 11:01:00 AM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice
Date: 11/17/2017 6:22:00 AM
You captured the mood well--whispers did their work--well written, best for a win, Janice!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/17/2017 8:24:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice

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