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Sweet Longing

She comes everyday at dusk, When the Sun's about to melt Down in his aerie nest. She comes and greets me With flowers in her hands And a smile on her pretty face... She touches me with her warmth-- The blushing of her rosy cheek-- She talks her heart's deepest to me And often laughs with joy... I laugh with her--Cry with her, Then try to wipe her tears: I'm left with the longing to hold her hand, When she kisses me goodbye, And bidding farewell, Walks away from the grave where I lie.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/16/2013 5:18:00 PM
These words are full of deep emotion and passion, wrapped up in sadness and sorrow. Nicely done
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Date: 8/22/2011 9:44:00 PM
You are very good yourself and your poem strikes a cord with this person. Thank you for your kind comments. God is awesome and we all on the soup do know that. God bless
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Date: 7/28/2011 5:15:00 PM
excellent poetry, deep in emotion, evokes images of a great love. top write.
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Date: 7/28/2011 4:08:00 PM
Wonderful creative writing today Akash. I will be back soon to read more if the gremlins in PoetrySoup will permit. Love, Carol
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