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Sweet Island Girl

Early morn Birds still sleep Crickets warm Not a peep Coffee in hand Dreams are free Thinking of you Thinking of me Last night's prayer Has made it here Rain soaked skies Begin to clear And what I see On distant shore Sweet Island girl I long for more Hear your heart We are in tune I love you so I'm coming soon ~Lyric Man Note: This is a write about being homesick for one you love and kind of hoping their homesick too.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/21/2018 7:57:00 AM
Nice to read you again. Memories of love, always poignant and beautiful. SuZ
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Date: 7/16/2018 6:29:00 PM
You make the reader wonder what her next prayer would be..If She would listen to her heart..If they'll ever be in tune again..or if their thoughts will wash away,like sad and lonely yesterdays..Such a sweet poem of longing Captain.
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Date: 7/2/2018 2:11:00 PM
Very sweet! :)
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Date: 6/21/2018 6:22:00 PM
So sincere, so sweet, beautiful. I love it.
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Date: 6/12/2018 9:53:00 PM
A beautiful lyric, Chance, of sweet romantic longing expressed with lovely rhythm and rhymes.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/13/2018 7:47:00 AM
Very nice! This is sweet :)
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Date: 5/13/2018 4:05:00 AM
What a beautiful romantic poem, I love lyrics that mention Island girl as I live on a little Island:-) hugs jan xx
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