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Sweet Apples

You’re like sweet apples in the summertime Like breezes through grasses you ease my mind Come whisper softly next to me You’re everything that I need 'Cause I need sweet apples and breezes in the summertime And I need soft whispers next to me to ease my mind Come dream beside me and be mine You’ll be all I need all through time Just whisper that you’re mine 1/9/2022 Be Mine Poetry Contest Sponsor, Regina McIntosh

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Ann Peck

Date: 4/11/2023 9:05:00 AM

So very sweet and lovely!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/19/2022 7:11:00 AM

Very romantic P.S. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Blessings xxoo

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/19/2022 7:22:00 AM

Thank you so much Connie! ~ps

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/19/2022 7:04:00 AM

"You’ll be all I need all through time" - Beautiful. Congratulations!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/19/2022 7:22:00 AM

Thank you, Christuraj! ~ps

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 1/19/2022 4:01:00 AM

I really enjoyed this. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/19/2022 7:21:00 AM

Thank you for sponsoring contests and I am honored to have placed. So glad that you liked my poem :) ~ps

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 1/17/2022 6:03:00 PM

Very nice P.S.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/17/2022 7:45:00 PM

Thank you, Timothy :) ~ps

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/16/2022 12:47:00 PM

A lovely write. Loved the ending. Have a blessed day/week....................

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/16/2022 2:40:00 PM

Thank you Paula -ps

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/14/2022 11:46:00 PM

So cute, a definite win I predict P.S. Thoroughly enjoyed this write, Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/15/2022 7:10:00 AM

Oh thank you! I enjoyed writing it! :) -ps

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/14/2022 3:20:00 PM

P.S., this reads like a song. A light and lovely write! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/14/2022 8:55:00 PM

It came to me as a song. Thank you for your kind words :) -ps

Wren Rushing

Date: 1/13/2022 6:34:00 PM

P.S. Sounds like your sweet on someone. This is a great poem, just in time for Valentine's! Good luck in Regina's contest!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/13/2022 7:09:00 PM

Maybe I'll wrap this up with a bow for the hubs :) Thank you for all your encouragement! ~ps

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/11/2022 3:14:00 AM

I enjoyed this P.S. I am not sure what she wants. I haven’t been too inspired lately. Guess my mind is on doing my income taxes. Blessings xxoo

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/11/2022 7:22:00 AM

I am glad you liked it. It came to me as a song…. I thought I’d toss it in that contest and just see how it did. I am sorry you’re not feeling inspired lately—l hate when that happens! Oh and I hate taxes, too :D ~ps