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Surrender and Gratitude

today's day was molded pure to a sweet surrender I'm sure to stop the fight of life's flight now to God I hold on tight to choose the right of eternity to lose what's lost, and be me I sing with joy of abundance gratitude for the chance of the dance no longer in a trance to escape my life no longer reels of red tape as if guided imagery on my life's tape I travel to a golden lamb, my life I shape Gratitude in my hands I'm sure with God's sweet love my heart is pure now on the red carpet to heavens blue cherabims going up a spiral ivy ridden staircase, I'm with Him!

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Date: 9/2/2010 12:10:00 PM
Beautiful, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 9/2/2010 11:25:00 AM
Susan such a lovely and inspirational piece to read .. so blessed to be your friend and fellow poet with such a wonderful gift to give God glory.. enjoyed with luv..my friend and thankxxx for your sweet comments today..luv..
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Date: 9/2/2010 10:37:00 AM
Beautiful write on surrendering everything to Him, love this write Susan, hope you are enjoying your day.. Love Wilma
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Date: 9/2/2010 10:07:00 AM
Excellent work that is a testimony to your faith..I especially like next to the last couplets..Keep the spirit inspired work flowing from your creative pen..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 9/2/2010 9:19:00 AM
lovely
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