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Don't go down sun Please stay up a little more Your colors are spectacular And though I've seen them all before I never seem to tire Of beholding pretty things And there's someone who I'm thinking of Your equivalent like she sings For in her voice so beautiful Live poems I write of And the subject of that poetry Is the woman who I love And if she were right here with me Together we would stand And watch your brilliant colors fade Before heading to dreamland

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Date: 10/11/2023 12:24:00 AM
Wow. This got me in the feels - love this, really love it :)) + fave
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Andres Luis Bigote
Date: 10/11/2023 2:54:00 AM
Thank you

Book: Shattered Sighs