sunset descending

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sanguine glow ebbing as it dips into the sea ~ sunset descending

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/11/2024 11:33:00 AM

WOW!!! What a beautiful picture and Haiku write. Love It... Have a blessed day writing away.............

Lin Lane
Date: 4/19/2024 6:52:00 AM

Thanks, Paula.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/19/2024 12:09:00 PM

Love to see it rise and also to see it set. I've always been an early riser and go to bed late. So have seen many over the years. Tom

Lin Lane
Date: 4/19/2024 6:52:00 AM

Oh, gosh, Tom... me too! Thanks.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/19/2024 3:00:00 AM

Beautiful!

Lin Lane
Date: 3/19/2024 5:23:00 AM

Thanks very much, Art.

John Lawless

Date: 3/18/2024 5:26:00 PM

the fire of a moment captured....great Haiku Lin

Lin Lane
Date: 3/19/2024 5:23:00 AM

That's exactly how such a sunset appears to be sometimes. Thanks, John!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/18/2024 4:10:00 PM

what an exquisite visual you created with your Haiku, Lin. I love the word "sanguine!" I enjoyed reading your poem. I felt calm and peace as I read it...have a great evening, hugs, Sara

Lin Lane
Date: 3/19/2024 5:23:00 AM

Good morning, Sara and thanks. It was such a sunset last night here. Sanguine is a song title I gave to one of my friend's songs years ago. I'm glad you like it, too.