Sunset

sunset by the bay shifting colors in the sky spectacular show 30 June 2015 Traditional Haiku Contest Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton *Image of Sunset by Manila Bay credit to Elmer R. Pedrezuela skyscraper.com

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Jack Ellison

Date: 7/4/2015 6:13:00 AM

So this is what I've been missing... shame on me! It's a winner... Santa once again says "sorry"! Love from Canada xxxx

Cona Adams

Date: 7/2/2015 7:33:00 AM

Great Haiku, Kim. Thanks.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/2/2015 12:01:00 AM

lovely, a sunset can bring so much inspiration, enjoyed this... good luck in the contest *luv, p.d.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/1/2015 8:38:00 PM

You got the idea of the 2 parts,work on the cut to line 3 Kim, now your line 3 redefines what you have already told us in lines 1 & 2 - bring in a different sense ex: a lone gull crying- Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/1/2015 1:57:00 PM

- Dear Kim, thank you for this really beautiful picture (7!!!!) - and congrats on your win !!! - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/1/2015 4:22:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning haiku Kim!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/1/2015 12:53:00 AM

Kim, congratulations on your Traditional Haiku win. Love LINDA

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/1/2015 12:31:00 AM

Sit down with a long, cool drink and watch your wonderful Haiku, Kim. Well done. Viv x

Skat A

Date: 7/1/2015 12:10:00 AM

Kim, :) Congratulations on your win. SKAT LOVE

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/30/2015 9:17:00 PM

You stuck to the 5 7 5 form which is all to the good. Also you positioned your sentences in an interesting manner in this work. Peace & Love Matthew Anish