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Sunrise On the Milkyway

A slow bright rising prevailing amongst vast darkness. Set a sail on an ocean of stars, mixed colours: Blazing, ripping, pulling. Evolving on the shoulders of millenniums , one after another Constipating life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/10/2013 12:24:00 AM
nicely done ;}
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Date: 6/2/2011 5:35:00 PM
It has a beauty all its own that is your work and God's ..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 5/28/2011 8:08:00 AM
Awesome write and imagery on this poem Derrick. Thank you for your comments, much appreciated. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 5/27/2011 12:53:00 PM
a great write Derrick, enjoyed reading this one.
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Date: 5/26/2011 1:49:00 AM
Pun intended, but that would be a lot of crap. Good poem Derrict. appreciate you commenting on mine. I'm going back to find a few more of yours. Charles
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Date: 5/25/2011 3:48:00 AM
A good, descriptive write, using poetic language. Regards, Robert.
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Date: 5/24/2011 8:21:00 PM
Awesome imagery, Derrick!! Unusual poem.
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Date: 5/24/2011 4:19:00 PM
Brilliant images of the night sky, Derrick. Taking a three-day fishing trip and I know we'll be able to see the Milky Way as well as some planets when we're far offshore. The last line was very intriguing. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/24/2011 3:47:00 PM
beautiful imagery to create a fine visual, derrick
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Date: 5/24/2011 2:17:00 PM
A mind blower, the Milkyway. I like this poem mucho. LOve, daver
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Date: 5/24/2011 1:41:00 PM
rich imagery with an expensive language....u have presented this very beautifully....marvellous !
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Date: 5/24/2011 1:18:00 PM
yes great imagery and well done. thank you for commenting on Tender Heart.
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