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Sunny Clouds

The rain's come down inside your soul. Months at a time and take their toll. It seems the end is coming soon. And then the angels change the tune. The fog is thick, you can't see far. You've spent your wish upon that star. The avenue is dry and clear. But you don't know which way to steer. The best that we can do sometimes. Is just sit down and write some rhymes. While others do the work of God. And try to help you not feel odd. Someday's the world is bright and fair. Other days, you sit and stare. Beyond the hope of ever finding. A glimpse of future that needs reminding. Within the moment of despair. Somehow the sun shines through the air. And brings a light you thought was gone. To help you meet another dawn. Note: This is about how in the midst of my life seemingly feeling like it was a total mess and I was feeling like I was just a mental case now. Somehow I knew that angels, (nurse's and doctors) were there to help me get back to a life where I could see the light and feel once again, hope. <3

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Date: 10/2/2019 11:52:00 AM
This poem made me go outside, the poem had alot of description and that formed a picture in my mind. Nice one!
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Robert Johnson
Date: 10/2/2019 11:57:00 AM
Thanks Madi. There is always hope. Have a great day. :) <3
Date: 8/7/2019 9:11:00 AM
I hope you have seized on to your hope and ridden it to the life you deserve. A prayer and a hug. ;0)
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Date: 8/7/2019 10:34:00 AM
Thank you Richard, I'm working on it. :) As everyone does every day of their life. God Bless. <3 :)
Date: 8/4/2019 7:27:00 PM
Everyone is saying inspirational, les and that is what this is exactly! You sure do inspired me, my good friend.
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Robert Johnson
Date: 8/4/2019 8:14:00 PM
<3 :) Thanks Andrea
Date: 8/4/2019 7:27:00 PM
also thanks for seeing so many of my poems recently. I am still behind here but let me go see a few more of yours. I see you have been very busy writing!!
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Date: 7/30/2019 5:25:00 PM
Inspirational and uplifting poem Leslie, I know many turn to poetry as a form of therapy or at a bad time in their life... i wrote my first poem since childhood when my hubby was undergoing cancer surgery and its got me through the toughest 5 years of my life:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/30/2019 5:48:00 PM
Thank you Jan. That is so true. I wrote a line once: I knew a man who thought he was pathetic. Left alone with his thoughts, became quite prophetic. That's what we do here on soup. We share our thoughts. :) <3
Date: 7/30/2019 4:31:00 PM
Inspirational poem. Thanks for sharing :)
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Date: 7/30/2019 4:45:00 PM
Thank you Heidi. <3 :)