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Sun and Moon

Sun Celestial behemoth Radiating burning energising Day star luminary satellite Waning waxing wooing Silvery phantom Moon 04.12.2021©deborah burch Form: Diamanté

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Joe Maverick

Date: 7/24/2023 1:05:00 PM

Sun moon day noon, such splendour Yet gone soon.'

Constance La France

Date: 4/22/2021 11:23:00 AM

Deborah, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt Shine Challenge with your wonderful Diamante poem, well done, love _ Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/17/2021 4:38:00 PM

oh wow, you did a really lovely job here. Awesome!

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/17/2021 4:49:00 PM

Thanks so much Andy!! My first Diamanté lol. But felt it an appropriate form for the theme. Lol. Big huggs and love my friend!! Deb

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/12/2021 8:03:00 PM

So magical! Nicely stated.

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/13/2021 11:55:00 AM

Awwww!! Thank you Joe!! Very much! Huggs! Deb

Robert Pettit

Date: 4/12/2021 2:33:00 PM

Nicely written short poem about the two most prominent celestial objects when seen from the earth.

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/13/2021 11:55:00 AM

Thanks Robert!! So many new forms I have not used but willing to step out of my box to try. Lol. Huggs. Deb