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Summer Solstice

Summer solstice A new born poem. The cock heralds far and wide the dawn of this day.

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Colin Coates

Date: 12/5/2012 9:30:00 AM

Lines one and three are brilliant. However Haiku should not have titles. Without the title you would not know its summer, as cocks herald all year long.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/5/2012 12:37:00 AM

Beautiful and touching! Glad to have a taste of your work! :) Thanks for your comment on my poem!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/6/2012 12:26:00 AM

Way to compare a new, genuine poem to the nature of dawn. Brilliantly penned! Always, Laura

Victoria Anderson-Throop

Date: 10/6/2012 6:13:00 AM

As an Alaskan the summer solstice is the premier day of celebration... You have given your readers a gift. Victoria (wandering in Africa)

Kate Aspinall

Date: 10/4/2012 12:20:00 PM

Dear Vassilis, Yes you may, and thank you. Regards Kate

Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 9/20/2012 4:36:00 PM

A beautifully crafted haiku! Bravo my friend and thank you for your comment on my page! Hugs